In the third haiku second line... isn't it suppose to be "Fireplaces can USE you" instead of "Fireplaces can us you"... This was good... I hardly see long haikus... great job...

go trees? i guess no one told me you added stuff. good job. *TI*

Ahh, such a BEAUTIFUL poem... I LOVED THAT MAN! OH, I'm putting that on my favorite stories' list! GREAT JOB!

Well done on the haiku. It's has a good imagery to it.
Mayumi Kobayashi