i love the way youve written this poem, its so easy for somebody to imagine themselves as the character, really feeling what they are, keep up the good work!^_^

This a very touching poem to read in the way that I can relate to it so well. I really like how you kept on repeating the stanza, "Don't touch me, please. . ." It adss emphasis to it. I think that you really captured how a lot of families, and a lot of lives are, and I congratulate you for being able to share it. very good poem, and keep up the good work!