Good Baz, you're amazing.
'to hear the very last release of breath.' I love that line especially.

I LOVE YOUR WRITING SO MUCH!
Sorry about that. But I do. It's fabulous! I can't think of any words to describe your poetry! There are too many! Brilliant, fantastic, great, stunning, beautiful. . .
Never stop writing! E!

Oh, LAURA!! That. Is. BRILLIANT.
"I'm never slightly angry, kind of sad
a lukewarm sorrow, only partly glad"
OOh, I love it. And love it and love it. You rock.