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| crochetpinkprincess 2004-02-09 ch 1, | Hilarious and original. Very entertaining... |
| Nasifah 2004-02-06 ch 1, | Hehe, I really like this! Stinking sirens. You did a good job, and this is really interesting all the way through. Also quite humerous. Keep writing! |
| Tourniquet-Whisper 2004-02-02 ch 1, | Great poem! I love the ending! |
| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2004-02-02 ch 1, | Love it! The rhyming seemed off in the second stanza, though. . .it's like an old ballad. Love it. -Jessica |
| without-roots 2004-02-01 ch 1, | I really like the rhythm in this poem and I think I should like to meet a siren and be her lover too. ^_^ If her voice didn't drive me to my death first. ~OB~ |
| Titanium Dream 2004-02-01 ch 1, | I particularly enjoyed the last verse; very amusing! And very original. |
| Mirrorwind 2004-01-31 ch 1, | You're right, I do like this one! And it has a summary and a title, too! I know it may not be fair, but when an author can't think of a title or summary, even a bad one, for their work, I tend to wonder about their creativity. Not in your case, though! This is really different -- I've never read anything like it (except one poem of my own, and yours is much better). I love the twist ending! One thing: in the third verse, I think you mean "grovel", instead of "gravel". But that's a typo. So other than that, an excellent, excellent job! |
| arbysauce93 2004-01-30 ch 1, | Aw! THis is so great. There really need to be more humorous poems out there. THe flow in this is so easy, very good job. Of course, the last stanza just finishes everything off beautifully. You can't help but smiling when reading this. Keep up the good work! |
| white-wings01 2004-01-30 ch 1, | Thats good and its very discriotive, i enjoyed it, good job. thankyou for reviewing my story, I'll try to fix it. ** You were the first peron to review me. Thankyou! ** |
| Seeing Starz 2004-01-11 ch 1, | Haha, awesome. *Seeing Starz* |