 Melerna 2005-08-25 . chapter 1BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Erin-chan is TEH AWSOMNESS! ^_^ Zaki has a new account... How have you been doing...? |
 Wistera 2005-03-08 . chapter 1::poketh:: Hey...did Carlye help you write this? Because if she didn't, it's odd that your writing should scream "Carlye helped me" at me.
Heh, this is like a nice remembrance of Erin. ::huggles it:: Really different than most of the crap on my favorite list. Bb out. |
 phiare 2004-03-16 . chapter 1Hey, it's the ketchup thing! Ha! (this is Jeni, btw) Was this the one you showed Mr. Yeargin? XD |
 Seeker of the Way 2004-01-22 . chapter 1How did this person get a stick in their chest?
Otherwise, pretty goofy!! |
 Cloudy no Miko 2004-01-11 . chapter 1kihihihihi! what a fun thing to think about. too bad they forgot to taste it.
but yes, bah! down with lowering the quality of ketchup in this country! even...though...i dont ever put ketchup on my food. hahahaha, uhh...well i guess if i DID use ketchup, then, um..ill just shut up then.
oh yeah. and DOWN WITH FICTIONPRESS AND THEIR DELETION OF DOUBLE LETTERS! ...it is fictionpress thats doing that, right? poop, i forgot. |
 Crelian2202 2004-01-11 . chapter 1dont use three dots that is an elipse it doesnt signal passing time. Use a comma every time that you had three dots. Also don't capitalize words you want emphasis on remember, Italics and exclamation marks are our friends. Other than that, eh. I honestly didn't find it funny. |