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| Edraith 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is so beautiful. I love the idea of rain being God's tears. The line "Those he loved were dancing in his tears" is a nice image, and it conmveys the idea how his tears are blessings for us. Nicely done. :-) |
| Damaged 2004-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely breath-taking poem! Keep this up! |