ooh. conane writes good stories. =3

Um the message was nice, but the setting and execution was somewhat uninspired. Not bad...
Came from TPS, decided to review.

I think it's a bit angsty more than spiritual...anyway it's got a good line going - it's good the way you stopped it at a kind of cliffie. I like how you've really adopted a child's perspective - it gives a fresh view.

That was really good. Interesting. I really liked it! ^.^