 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-03 . chapter 2I love this one, very elegant. |
 Miki Watanabe 2004-01-29 . chapter 1Well, I don't know anything about sonnets, but I liked this one. |
 Panini 2004-01-17 . chapter 1Beautiful, and so very true. |
 Kix Williams 2004-01-15 . chapter 2This is probably my favorite of the three sonnets. Though I'm still trying to figure out the poems/coins rhyme. 8-Þ |
 Kix Williams 2004-01-15 . chapter 1Tis a very good poem, it is. |
 Kix Williams 2004-01-15 . chapter 3Yeah, this poem is kinda sad. But tis a good poem. You do good stuff with the sonnet form, you do. |
 Thomasina Aquina1 2004-01-14 . chapter 2Nice, you're on a creativity as the theme kick, aren't you? In a way, anyway. You're good at sonnets, at least the ones I've seen. They're a very difficult and demanding form of poetry but they yield the most beautiful and lyrical results, not least because they don't just let the poets ramble, they have to have sense and structure which makes your poems more complete.
Well your sonnet embodied all that. You should be proud.
Katy |
 Thomasina Aquina1 2004-01-13 . chapter 1OOh, nice. Multiple themes that you balance well. Nice to have some of your words with me.
You makes some very good points which, to me especially, can't seem to help but make good poetry so, I salute you!
Katy |
 kalariah 2004-01-11 . chapter 1I really like this; you've put a lot of thought-provoking things in here. Maybe I shouldn't be so quick to pass people by. |