if you give up hope now, it will never happen. don't give up if you really love him. ever. things can happen. good job jackie

Well, one person said that they thought the beginning was better than the end- I'd say the exact opposite. It's not a big difference or anything, but I do like it. And I love the sitting on the edge of the moon thing. very cute.

Oh I love the imagery and emotion in this... and I know exactly how you feel... great job. thanks for all the reviews!

This is really sweet..creates some very interesting images...nice..nice..

Wow... I love the stars. Nothing like them to make one think about his/her place in the universe.
I loved this one too- it took me about four readings to even remotely get it, lol. It feels kinda contradictory, but that's great- love usually is.
The only little thing I can think of is that the last four lines seem a little forced and not totally (but very close!) coherent with the rest of the poem. Just a thought.
Upon the whole... awesome poem.

very nice. i like it.

Yay, another one of ur cute love poems. I like a lot.

still as good as the first time I read it.

Been there done that Nicely written those words are just another way to manipulate some. Great Work
Please R&R some of my work

hey loved your poem, especially the edge of the moon thing. very cute. in a good way:) sorry bout the whole heartbreak thing. keep it up-
crayzie*
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love it completely!! *favs it*