 Arcade Princess 2005-03-14 . chapter 1You know you really need to get better about the whole starting a story and then abandoning it. No compliments for you until you get off your lazy butt and actually WRITE something. Hopefully something to finish one of your stories that you NEVER FINISH! So nyah ;-P |
 Blythe.Naurin 2005-03-11 . chapter 1Hi!I liked your story!Pour King, he must be dead by now... Anyway, they're Ok and I think that is what they care about.Aren't Kumori, Chan and Ochiru going to revenge? OK, they don't know who it was... maybe they can imagine. Everybody can imagine whatever she or he wants to! (That's great).
Greets,Blythe. |
 Jessica Wiley 2005-02-28 . chapter 1 Dude, have you read Heir Apparent, well if you write something like this, I swear you will like it. |
 bluewaves64 2004-12-28 . chapter 1Hmm... you're going to continue with this story right? I think it will turn out to be a very nice story. There were a few mistakes made (i think it's typo error) but other than that, it's great. Pls update... |
 Rising Falcon 2004-12-03 . chapter 1Wha-END?! Already?! |
 Nanners 2004-11-15 . chapter 1If this was a short story and you desided to end it here, then you're mean. If not, then update soon, like, ASAP, because I just love it, and I want to know what happens. |
 aknightsgoldenrose 2004-11-15 . chapter 1I noticed a few mistakes but otherwise it is great. |