Oh please update i really like your story and i want to read more...

I was sifting through older stories when I found this one, and it caught my eye. Not a bad story, but a couple things I wanted to point out to you. First, Ceasar was another name for an Emperor. 'Hail Ceasar' was the same as 'Hail the Emperor'. This was done after Ceasar had been killed in 44 B.C. and Augustus became the first emperor of the empire. (before it had been a republic). Secondly, Constantinople was named after Constantine, so in order or names, this one would have been more likely to appear. My last one is in the first second chapter or so. Alexander says 'Hail Zeus'. If these are Roman soldiers, Zeus becomes Jupiter. Otherwise, good story.

Nice story update soon

omg this chappy is really great please update soon!

i really love your story! plesae update soon!!

Interesting story. Um. I did notice a typo in chapter 2, though. I think you meant fuzzy beard not fussy beard. Love the details.

OH MY GOD! Auriel is not GOING to be sold off with her grandma!? Poor Auriel! Alexander and Augustus will be going to the slave auction! I HOPE HE SO BUYS AURIEL AND HER GRANDMOTHER! OMG! THE SUSPENSE! >_< UPDATE ASAP VAN! HURRY! You are KILLING ME HERE!
P.S. GREAT chappie and you updated so quickly as well! whoot! Update ASAP again! ^-^

I LOVE this story! It's so cool on all the details about Rome you're giving. I'm doing a study on Rome this year. Anyway, love the story so far! Keep writing and update soon! Oh, and if you have time, please review on of my newer stories. :)

Hmm.. interesting story so far! Update soon... Senator Nero... I remember there was an Empire Nero who was psychoic... or he pretended to be. I'm pretty sure he was the one who named his horse a senator... Anyhows, continue with writing!

*swirls in my eyes* Damn the Roman money system. But o well, enough. I've gotta do what I came here to do. *Nods* yup I must do that THING! you know the THING! >XD *laughs insanely* ok ok enough joking anyways. Wow...Alexander is so noble and stuff O.o who would've thought. Poor Auriel and her grandma, they got captured and they are being sold off as slaves and stuff. Hope they will be sold off together at least. O_o; lotz of people are SO very INTERESTED in Auriel...ahem anyways. Back to reviewing. O_o; I never knew Roman Emperors marry their own sisters... Tis just me or does it remind me of the Egyptians or do they do the same thing? To their sayings "Keep the Royal blood PURE." eh? O well, do continue ^-^ *Nods* good chappie Van! -_-;; write faster so then I'm not driven to insanity O.o even though I'm insane already but driven to insanity more? >XD *laughs insanely* Anyways; update ASAP then! WHOOT! ^-^ yay!

Very well written. It's very hard to find good historical stories. Do continue.

Wicked

A very good story, gave me the feeling of making history come alive. I found it interesting, seeing that I do learn alot about Roman history in school.
One suggestion, watch you tenses, past or present? Instead of saying "he is riding" say "he was riding" or else there will be a conflict with the other verb usages in your story.
I will be keeping an eye on this fic, so keep updating!

GAH! YOU STOPPED! WHY! WHY! *cries* T_T YOU CRUEL CRUEL PERSON! WRITE MORE! FASTER! I WANT TO READ MORE! MORE I TELL YEE! MORE! O one more thing ^-^ it's a good chapter but sad...*sniff* poor Auriel, she is lied to and her father got killed. SAD! T_T ok hurry up and write more I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S NEXT! HURRY VAN!

Very powerful...
I cannot wait to read the first chapter.
Thank you so much for the review.