Reviews for because she never makes up her mind

frugale 2004-03-14 ch 1,	I am delighted. How cool can the "sheet" stanza be? And what about your use of parenthesis? "and your eyes are anything when they are written in text." Brilliant.
Shadafakup 2004-02-17 ch 1,	Wow, I loved this hun. It could be read in so many different ways. The whole flow of the piece was lovely, the tone, the mood, as well as the metric. I don't know what to say about this, its just like this hallucigenic(sp?) spin through the girl's thoughts. I loved the last stanza - that was just awesome. The 'danger love' concept thing was really unique. Nice one here, even if I did not get it all the time. Fully enjoyable. ~Shadafakup P.S. Sorry I took so long to return the review. School was this evil **. P.P.S. Now that you mention it, I think yeap, it was from Mad Girl's Love Song, although the last time I read it was probably June last yr.
Jojo! 2004-01-12 ch 1,	YAY SHE'S BACK TO WRITING! I love my twin!
K. Evenstar 2004-01-12 ch 1,	Wow. Very confusing and I'm not sure I fully understand it, but I like it nonetheless. I like the way you've set it out, with the bits between brackets. I am impressed. Good stuff!