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| dawningfear 2004-04-19 ch 1,   | Yeah, it's a bad pun. But there's this wonderful twitchy smile that accompanies the bad pun. I am compelled to laugh guiltily and read it once more. And I still snicker wickedly when I read "But my hart/Is a pet/I keep it safe". It's dirty humour, wordplay. It's slapstick humour for literary geeks. But amusement is amusement, and this is bloody entertaining. |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-01-12 ch 1, | Very nice. I especially liked the part about venison...made me smile.. |