   D S Rollins 2004-11-06 . chapter 1HA! i always re-read this poem, that's how much i am hooked. You have a gift. |
 Ebony Moonlight 2004-06-21 . chapter 1O.O The poem itself was nice, and I like the darkness of the final stanza. Keep up the great work!!
~The One and Only |
 C. Faith Carpentieri 2004-06-16 . chapter 1OUCH. Cold. |
 Pip Stamfordis 2004-01-24 . chapter 1beautiful! wonderful! a great read-aloud-only peice of poetry. i am going to print this page. |
 AttRs Vicious Ley 2004-01-12 . chapter 1i liked this poem, too. thanx again for ur reviews |
 MistrissD 2004-01-12 . chapter 1The rhyming in each line is so awesome. The last stanza you could do with or without but the last line ** just ties it all together. Check out dope's '**' hehe you might like it ^.~ |
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