I LOVE this. Wonderful imagery. Indeed, indeed...

Maybe one of these days I could watch over you or simply be an onlooker as you create your writngs, because it has to be one of the most beautiful sights worth seeing.

Yay, another good poem.

Image I'm getting is this ancient, injured thing sitting in a box turned on its side, facing the sea with the moon shining high above. Very desolate scene, all black and white and grey, and that poor little creature is just sitting there in its box with its knees against its chest and rocking back and forth, whispering mad things to itself and to the sea birds that keep coming and bothering it, and to the waves.
Wow. If you can inspire that much thought, and that much of a picture...you are truly, truly gifted.

Wow. I really, really do like that.

I don't like it as much as I do some ofyour others-but still nice ^__^

glorioso!