I like this one. Tis V. fun, V. good, and V. interesting. W/ yer permission I would like to draw out the characters and the story. Write more please ^^
You are talented, as I said. You need to keep to the plot, unless the concert has something to do with the plot (like vampires there or something), but I would like to be your beta. Is there anyway I can be it? Please email me at shadowsdogs@yahoo.com.