That was good i tell you ;)

Wow! This is really powerful stuff! You have here skilfully created a situation without hardly letting on any more than we need to know but the bare essentials, and it makes for ap articularly mysterious and interesting story. Keep up the good work!
And thanks for your review!

WOW! Kick ** first chapter, amigo. Definitely putting this up in my favorites. Other than some slight confusion over who Brennan and Gareth were, this first chapter flowed really well. Keep it up! And tell me when you finally finish revamping SC, ok?

I look forward to it.

Hey, good chapter! ^_^ Just one thing though: you didn't describe the characters' appearance... Well, except for Catrin's blue eyes. >_< You know, the description of the characters' appearance is important to us readers because when we read, we picture the scene in our minds... or at least I do. ^^;

Anyway, try to have more descriptions next time, okay? Yes, that includes the setting's descriptions. ^_^

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"Omai wa baka!" (You're an idiot!)
"Ie! Oreh wa baka jannai! Oreh wa TENSAI!" (No! I'm not an idiot! I'm a GENIUS!)
~Part of my battle in Japanese with my sister ^^;
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