| Reviews for Faith |
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singingspeechless 7/30/04 . chapter 1pretty. |
fudgelolly 6/7/04 . chapter 1Great poem. Very inspiring. Thinking about the topic Faith, i guess that faith and hope is usually what keeps us going. Really good poem especially "I place no faith in words. They are ever-changing, not everlasting. They move with the seasons And change with the weather." Really meaningful. Factual but also very poetic! Great Poem :P *i must have mentioned this at least a million times :) |
tofujunky 4/17/04 . chapter 1You absolutely have remarkable diction. Wow! is basically all I can say about this piece. Magnifico! The words, the flow - pure lovely. But . . . "And when actions are false proved." There's something about that line that doesn't click for me. "False proved" sounds a little odd. Maybe it's just me. *shrugs shoulders* :) |
Incrys 3/26/04 . chapter 1The rhythem was excellent, and I loved the theme. An interesting way to look at it. |
Ancamna 3/16/04 . chapter 1Oh, that's sad...though in some ways true... |
Dancing Waters 3/14/04 . chapter 1gave me goosebumps. lovely. no doubt you can write! -love, enat |
Lhunuial 3/5/04 . chapter 1Beautiful, just beautiful. It's true that silence is what remains. You've managed to portray that wonderfully and silence is often one of the best things there are. |
AngelLLY1 1/30/04 . chapter 1This is really good I love it! |
WarriorHeart 1/26/04 . chapter 1This was great. Very well written and very powerful. |
EndlessLove4u 1/21/04 . chapter 1I love it...specially the last three sentences...like it a lot! |
Nab 1/20/04 . chapter 1Very nice, 'Words are ever-changing, not everlasting' its a great line and a great poem |
Seeker of the Way 1/19/04 . chapter 1Wow! I feel like this. Felt like this. Very good job! Nice movement in the verses. |
BecomingMyself 1/18/04 . chapter 1Sad to have no faith at all! Nice way of putting it... |
TumblingKitty 1/18/04 . chapter 1Who is more true to yourself than you? |
everflame 1/13/04 . chapter 1Ah, very nice! Anglel Raye said I'd like your poetry, and she was right! Keep it up |