Very cute story - I really enjoyed it!

I'm assuming that Nick and Jen are friends, right? How old are they?

Hehe - just my curious little mind!

Keep writing!

Very cute

haha, that was a cute chapter. light and humorous.. ^_^ keep going!
-Jade

this is my first time ever to fictionpress.com...im a fanfiction.net person and a friend of mine read ur story and absolutely loved it and told me to read it. THIS IS THE CUTEST THING EVER!! MAKE IT A MINI SERIES! i want more right now!! what are you doing reading this!! go write another chapter right this second! gogogogogogogogogo!

SO GOOD...SO CUTE...AW IS THERE ANY MORE, i LOVE ROMANCE THAT WAS SO SWEET...LOVE YOUR STORY...PLEASE WRITE MORE, I WANNA KNOW MORE ABOUT THE TWO OF THEM...

aww, cuteness.

lol it was cute. you should write more of these seeing as you seem to have a talent for writing them. flawless storm.

=DD Weeh. I loved it.

uhm.
i dun reallY like it.
i think everything's moving a little fast.. and a little too convenient. like how nick just 'happened' to get the idea to kiss jen when it's reall out of character.
then again, it's your story. =]