whoa that was good. throw in some story line and this can really go places

really good story, great action. but i'm a little confused on this line:
"What do you believe me to be?, I could be just a regular woman, I could be a demon, I could be anything you can imagine, or maybe if your unlucky something you couldn't every possibly imagine, but really its your decision" he say again in a icy monotone voice.
*is it a woman talking or is it a man? i think you need to looke at you letter cases, and add an 's' to a few places, but other than that, its great, keep writng!

**Claps** NIcely done, a few problems, but they are far fewer than my first drafts.