This is beautiful, and like many have said already, your use of imagery is amazing and astounding, the descriptions you used to enhance your emotions just maybe the poem glow. Awesome work.

Sad. But I know how it feels.

Hey girl! Thanks for reviewing my new story!
I really liked the fourth stanza the best, especially the first sentence of it.
Your poem is beautiful, and the way you weave your words even more so. I hate to sound like a tard, but it's refreshing to finally someone who knows what they're doing in poetry. You have it all: the smoothness, the imagination, the determination, and the drive.
Keep up the great work

I like, I like. The awesome imagery.

Wow... I love the style and I love.. everything. I don't know what to say. It's just so beautiful. Amazing job!

great imagery!!

THis is beautiful... you are really talented.