hehehe. it's wonderful, you can almost hear the music in the background while reading this. Very strong visuals you summon with so few words - a sign of a damn good writer. I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Wow, thats really interesting. Although the cutting scars and the vampire was a bit genretypicalliptic, I loved the phrasing of her conversation with herself and the irony of the first sentence. 100 words is a great length to pull someone in, describe the character and leave them before they get bored. Wonderful, just wonderful.