Beautiful!! I know that wont help any but still BEAUTFUL. Write more poems i am running out of ones to read!

-- Hmm,Are you sure this is a revised version? I don't remember completely how the last one went, but I have noticed all the same mistakes in terms of type O/spelling. I wonder if, perhaps, you put the worng doccument in? Perhaps it is just me being pickier than usual. SOrry it took so long to get back to you on it. Basically, all my former comments still stand as far as I can tell. I still think it's an excellent poem though.
Remy/The Blind Guardian

Many lines started with At. Also delete 'but' when it starts a line. Lines sound better when they dont start with transitions. Other than that great job.