This is SO cool! I love dragon and foxes, and am Christian... wow, awesome!

~ Faunamon

Hey! Is AngelTigress03 from the FFC Boards.. Didn't know you were on FictionPress

This is very well written. I like the storyline.

This was great! I liked it! How Mandarin got wings was very inventive, and I liked the ties that went with it.
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Makes me wish my best friend were close by.
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Well, keep writing Yuoo! I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Kayla Silvercat

This is a very nice story. The way it is written would make it an excellent children's story. I was a little put off by Fennec's meditation and transe. But other than that it was very lovely and quite original. Well done. :)

You did a nice job. I don't know how long you've been writing, so I hope I'm saying the right thing...
You've definetly got your concept down, and you know what you want to happen. That's good, but you need to work a little bit on the stuff that's in between. A little anecdote about what happened for that year that Yuoo was on the island, for example.
But I do like how there was an actual process involved in making the wings, not just wave your hands and *poof* she's got wings. Again, a little bit showing the relationship between Yuoo and the dragons would have made the whole "trust" thing a little more authentic.
Keep writing! A lot of this stuff just comes with time.

A great story, enchanting and charming.
Very touching. Love it and enjoyed it a lot.
"And the blind may see the light of God."

A very captivating short story, for which the I believe deserves nothing less than the honor of having the Pulitzer name bestowed upon it.