Wow this was very god as well. I like how you can take past life situations and make them seem like they are happening all over again. You're ingeniously creative, keep it up. Please write more too!

Meh. I have a feeling next chapter is gunna make me cry isn't it? Well as for this chapter its awesome! I love the bike 'scene' that was great, and the daydreams. Konstantin is a good character man. And I agree, he is being babyed too much! :) Keep going, its awesome. Best chapter yet!

The story is getting more intense, and the pace is picking up. You've introduced a lot of characters in this chapter, and it might be difficult to remember who everyone is. Other than that, I really like the direction this story is taking, and I can't wait for Ch.4.

I really liked the first chapter, it was sad and poignant. It's an area of history I know little about, so I am excited to keep reading. One minor point, I noticed a misuse of it's in the story, I would check those.

Íllés is so bitter, but I know why. Arg. I don't know what to think about the Russian guy... I loved this chapter as well, I think you are doing a great job on it. Wow, especially if you have no direction for it yet, I know that can be hard to make a story under those circumstances sometimes. Trust me it happens alot to me.

This is really good...kinda dark in a way...
*~sparkli chick~*

Very bleak, but with a personal side. I like it a lot... looking forward to more of this story. This is a great introduction, really helps to set the mood.

Poor Jöszef! Arg! This is such a good story, mijn vriendin. It is different than Frantic Shadow -- but it's none the less great! Please keep this one going I love it. Oh and sorry I can't remember the title, its an awesome title, I'm just a weirdo without a brain sometimes. o.o; You are making me want to start writing my own again, I get this feeling everytime I see one of your chapters/stories. *Huggles.* Mij min u! ::solar::

I just wanted to complement on this. I like it. though it's so depressing to understand what the girl's going through. you brought in a little excitment about the real world

Very well written, I enjoyed reading it, and was also glad to learn a few things, (in terms of history, I'm pretty damn hopeless...).
Hope to see more soon :)