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i'm sad it stoped there.
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aw...this story cant be over yet!!

please update soon!

Can't wait until the next chapter!
Update soon~

update soon. this is such a great story.

my goodness, this is twisted. i never would have thought that i'd enjoy reading about homosexuality, yet here i am, reading not only slash but incest as well. i dunno, the forbidden twisted-ness of this sort of...alluring. or something. well, continue, at any rate. i know you havent updated, but one can hope.
-kon

please please update soon! This story is totally awesome! Great work!

~Kyle's Precious Little Girl

I'll say I really love this story. It's very intresting. I can't wait to see how the their relationship will progress. *giggles*

Woah, big change in character ^^; Can't wait to see the next chapter~ XD

I don't see many stories written from a male's point of view :) Girls just seem more the kind who would talk to themself. But I liked the first chapter ^^

WTF I WANT MORE! XD

this story reminds me of "cruel intentions"; which i love

the whole mood of it all...

anyway...it's a really awesome story. can't wait to read more ^^

Loved!

Please please please update this ASAP >_

I really do lurves this story so far :Dbut I think you should definately get a beta reader. things like Your/you're...and other grammar stuff ^^;;Just wondering...are you british?

this story is awesome... you must post more soon.