this really made me think. it's going on my faves for sure. it's so inspiring, i might just start a story on the fuel it gives me.

whoa! nice story. it touched my heart. it was so beautiful. i think im gonna tear.

I'm not generally a fan of description peices. Sure, description is nice in a story, but I normally prefer dialogue. This, however, changed my mind a bit.
Eloquent without being pretentious, contemplative without being unrealistic, this is one excellent peice.
The paragraph that begins "She was so many things..." was particularly exquisite.

OH MY GOD...
please tell me that there is more to this story, I wanna know so much more...who is this truly amazing girl, is she based off of you...and who is this guy who seems to have fallen in love with her?

lovely 10/10

That was, just so beautiful, you did brillant at describing everything about this girl.
Everything about this was beautiful, and moving peice of work.
cheeky-bear007
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