Hi,
AAgain your poetry talent is expressed.
Thanks for sharing :)

Very well written and absolutely finished strong song...
Good one!

This is a really good good good good song. You should think of writing more.

this is really good, I liked it. it was melochalant *dont think i spelled that right, lmao), and meaningful, though slightly depressing

Good message. I like the way your words go together, and some of the verses were really well put together. Good song