awesome originality...love your though process. great choice of words and well well done here! ;)

I really like the idea. It's nice to read something creative.

Weird! But cool!

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I am just speechless. This is amazing. It's so short and simple, but just amazing. I can't think of much else to say, but you reallyt can find beauty in anything.

That was very well written. I've added it to my favorite stories list.

God bless!

Ooh, I like! Very short, and very pretty. Your usage of words was brilliant. I'm jealous.

I read your summary and read this straight away. That line is great 'Because beauty can be found everywhere.'

I read your summary and read this straight away. That line is great 'Because beauty can be found everywhere.'

Lol, much better than my scribbled doodles of red blood cells during Anatomy and Physiology lectures...

(blinks and applauds loudly) It's absolutely amazing that you have made something so simple and basic beautiful. On a less poetic note, I'd like to say: Aww...poor cell...sniff sniff.

You have an extrordinary way with words. You get your point across with incredible description without going overboard. Another great story, I have added you to my favorites list. As always, keep writing.
**Slave**

This really deserves a 'wow'. If only my biology classes could be made this interesting...
This is definitely an unusual choice of topic, but I think that's what makes it so good. :)

Wow... that was quite interesting. God, you're a moving writer, and you have just influenced me to become a biologist... and that is one amazing feat, my friend.
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~icecream~

Wow, this is beautiful. I like the last line a lot...sorry, can't find anything to criticize! This is really nice. ^__^

Bwahahah. I am infinitely amused.
I don't have many remarks except that I liked the way you built the sentences.
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|Meduza|