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| magnusthewolf 2006-10-10 ch 1,  | abuseawesome originality...love your though process. great choice of words and well well done here! ;) |
| Pastrami Sauce Camel Soup 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI really like the idea. It's nice to read something creative. |
| Toledo 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseWeird! But cool! |
| Lellida 2005-07-28 ch 1, | abuse... I am just speechless. This is amazing. It's so short and simple, but just amazing. I can't think of much else to say, but you reallyt can find beauty in anything. |
| giveGodtheglory 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was very well written. I've added it to my favorite stories list. God bless! |
| Veg-Head Cannibalism 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I like! Very short, and very pretty. Your usage of words was brilliant. I'm jealous. |
| Calmhorizon 2005-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read your summary and read this straight away. That line is great 'Because beauty can be found everywhere.' |
| Calmhorizon 2005-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read your summary and read this straight away. That line is great 'Because beauty can be found everywhere.' |
| Child of Dusk 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abuseLol, much better than my scribbled doodles of red blood cells during Anatomy and Physiology lectures... |
| Raven Aorla 2004-08-13 ch 1, | abuse(blinks and applauds loudly) It's absolutely amazing that you have made something so simple and basic beautiful. On a less poetic note, I'd like to say: Aww...poor cell...sniff sniff. |
| slave to the voices 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abuseYou have an extrordinary way with words. You get your point across with incredible description without going overboard. Another great story, I have added you to my favorites list. As always, keep writing. **Slave** |
| Silver Dolphin - archive 2004-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThis really deserves a 'wow'. If only my biology classes could be made this interesting... This is definitely an unusual choice of topic, but I think that's what makes it so good. :) |
| Tipped 2004-05-05 ch 1, | abuseWow... that was quite interesting. God, you're a moving writer, and you have just influenced me to become a biologist... and that is one amazing feat, my friend. ^_^ ~icecream~ |
| Earthsong12 2004-03-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is beautiful. I like the last line a lot...sorry, can't find anything to criticize! This is really nice. ^__^ |
| Naatz 2004-03-19 ch 1, | abuseBwahahah. I am infinitely amused. I don't have many remarks except that I liked the way you built the sentences. ^_^ |Meduza| |