 magnusthewolf 2006-10-10 . chapter 1awesome originality...love your though process. great choice of words and well well done here! ;) |
 Pastrami Sauce Camel Soup 2006-07-20 . chapter 1I really like the idea. It's nice to read something creative. |
 Toledo 2005-09-11 . chapter 1Weird! But cool! |
 Lellida 2005-07-28 . chapter 1...
I am just speechless. This is amazing. It's so short and simple, but just amazing. I can't think of much else to say, but you reallyt can find beauty in anything. |
 giveGodtheglory 2005-07-03 . chapter 1That was very well written. I've added it to my favorite stories list.
God bless! |
 Veg-Head Cannibalism 2005-05-07 . chapter 1Ooh, I like! Very short, and very pretty. Your usage of words was brilliant. I'm jealous. |
 Calmhorizon 2005-03-09 . chapter 1 I read your summary and read this straight away. That line is great 'Because beauty can be found everywhere.' |
 Calmhorizon 2005-03-09 . chapter 1 I read your summary and read this straight away. That line is great 'Because beauty can be found everywhere.' |
 Child of Dusk 2005-01-26 . chapter 1Lol, much better than my scribbled doodles of red blood cells during Anatomy and Physiology lectures... |
 Raven Aorla 2004-08-13 . chapter 1(blinks and applauds loudly) It's absolutely amazing that you have made something so simple and basic beautiful. On a less poetic note, I'd like to say: Aww...poor cell...sniff sniff. |
 slave to the voices 2004-05-31 . chapter 1You have an extrordinary way with words. You get your point across with incredible description without going overboard. Another great story, I have added you to my favorites list. As always, keep writing.
**Slave** |
 Silver Dolphin - archive 2004-05-08 . chapter 1This really deserves a 'wow'. If only my biology classes could be made this interesting...
This is definitely an unusual choice of topic, but I think that's what makes it so good. :) |
 Tipped 2004-05-05 . chapter 1Wow... that was quite interesting. God, you're a moving writer, and you have just influenced me to become a biologist... and that is one amazing feat, my friend.
^_^
~icecream~ |
 Earthsong12 2004-03-24 . chapter 1Wow, this is beautiful. I like the last line a lot...sorry, can't find anything to criticize! This is really nice. ^__^ |
 Naatz 2004-03-19 . chapter 1Bwahahah. I am infinitely amused.
I don't have many remarks except that I liked the way you built the sentences.
^_^
|Meduza| |