This is great stuff, but I hope you will take the "prozac milkshake" concept and push it further . . . dig into the specifics of religion and conformity. Great beginning!

the first line was absolute brilliance, as was the rest. awesome haikus are hard to come by, i'm glad i've found you.

so interesting and creative .

thats one impressive haiku. not that i'm an expert or anything, but i know what i likes.
interesting source of inspiration too.
-guy.

I love it..absolutely brilliant and insightful...

Brilliant. I love the title!
*lime-girl*

*blinks* How'd I miss this one?
I like it. Great imagery, as always. Such an interesting way to put it.
-Jess

Maybe that Jessica needs to read your bio first... *laughs* But, great haiku.

Interesting. Very powerful.

Flame? Damn it, you need better self esteem. You're bloody divine.

I am a Christian, but nonetheless this was very original and a creative way to present it.

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You're an idiot.
Just...idiot.

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I wanna have your children.
That ROCKED. I love it.
-Jess

Ah you have the most unique take on things *ever*. Such an awesome awesome play on words.
lyv