interesting poem. very strong...(something else i have to say...if u want to know tell me)dont repete yourself too much though, its confusing if you do. with love always from moi-mijoe

OOh I love this poem!! Very good job. I wish I was brave enough to do this, but I'm afraid of what other people will think. Silly me.
- Allison
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0_0 woa. At first I thought you were mocking you-know-who, but I realized you didn't as you went on. This poem is really awesome Lauren. "Her wrists go numb" very powerful, and the last two lines are phenominal. Seriously- even better than the other one.