Kinda funny, but if you put it in the play section, put it in play form! Other than that it's good. Make the next chapter a little longer, thoguh.

Yay rum!
Okay, back on topic. It's kinda funny even though I have no idea of what you are talking about. Maybe it would be easier to understand if you put a little backround or said what the speach is about in an author's not or something.
Well, that's my two cents.