Wow, this was amazing and beautiful. I am so blown away by the power that this story wields.

-Rain

This is such a powerful story, very well written. I love the ending, as if her death had freed her of the torment and now she can go on with death to take her. though I did think it odd that death was drinking ale is't death beyond the need for such things isuppose he could still drink to fit with people though. All in all i loved it. :)

That was just... beautiful. You're really good with diction and even better at dialouge. I love it. Death personified always interests me, but I've never read anything from death's point of view. Lovely. Death is just poetic enough, the whole things really very melancholy. Touching.
A bit confusing at times, especially the end, but once I read it a couple of times I got it. That may just have been because I didn't understand which of them was death at first, but now I get it. bravo. : - D Good job.

Okay... this is kinda haunting...
I like it, although it seems a bit... unclear, I guess.
I like the way you tell this story, from the perspective of Death.
~Valken

Wow, we are left speechless and in awe of this story. It is truly amazing and you must be very talented to write this great work.
:)
The_Wanderers