 C.K. Sarvis 2004-01-16 . chapter 1This is a nice poem, but I'm still trying to figure out who has the time to write 120 poems... wow. Well, this is a very nice poem, and I can't really judge you on your overall poetry considering this is the first one I've read, but I don't think there's any way that I will read all of your poems, maybe 50... if your lucky. Well, this poem sends a good message, and I do like it. I'm trying to figure out the rhyme scheme, if any, but I do see rhyming. Thank you for reviewing my poem, I hope to see more soon. |