The last line is so bright that it actually decreasing the gloomy meaning of the poem. However, it is such a good line that it can be used in any of your future poems.

I look forward to reading more of your work soon! Keep up the amazing work! =)

The last line is bold and striking, and I love the interconnection. Excellent.

I love the personification here! Keep it up! It's wonderful.

I love everything but the last line. The 'so' really makes the rhythm awkward, and it sounds rather like a drawl from a stupid teenager. Just fix that, and it'll be perfect.

I love this haiku. The symbol of the white canvas is particularly striking. I can see the sun rising, and I am in a room with no windows. Consider that a huge compliment. Not many writers' work can do that.

Hey, I'll review all of your haikus, with a little mini-critique on each one. This is a nice haiku for starters. While I love the second line, the third line needs work. I believe that it is too 'final' for a haiku. I think that haikus are supposed to make you muse long after they are over.

Sombre, hehe. Somber. -_-x Excuse my USA-ness.

Anyway~ Mixed emotions in a little haiku, brilliant!

The idea of the /skies/ themselves being set on fire is a rather interesting notion, and does it not look so? Ah yeah. Good, good.

Rather powerful. Good personification, makes the earth seem all the more ancient. Though I'd think of it more as the earth sleeping, and then yawning when it wakes up. (Haha.)

Ah. This is good as well. The use of the word "hymns" adds a bit of something to it.

The thought of a white canvas lends an idea of beginning, rather than ending. Good job!

Ah~ This captures the feelings and atmosphere very well.

(By the way, thanks for the reviews.)

The last word ended it perfectly... "momotonously"...

Another wonderful one... I'm craving for more...

AGAIN ANOTHER EXCELLENT POETRY... I love the personification...