Ah I love it, sorry about the earlier review, I hadn't gotten very far...

good liked it

Good story, one thing though, when someone different is talking you have to start a new paragraph. You have a ton of people talking all in the same paragraph and it gets confusing.

This was a wonderful story! One of the best ones I've found on here! Ah, the ending is so sad. :(

I liked this chapter youre storys pretty good

I love it so far.. Hopefully I'll see more soon.. the only part I don't like is the formatting - it makse it incredibly hard to read. If I hadn't liked the first chapter so much I woulda said screw it and stopped reading when it got all condensed.

HeHeHe...TONY!...That's all I have to say for you to know what I mean...Lemme know when you have more. See Ya

"I can't see me loving nobody but you for all my life" ;)

Continue! I'm intrigued about the girl Tom has been partnered with!