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| Kentura Dragmire 2004-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. Seems a bit clumsy with the "hath"'s, but "burn my flesh, decay this vessel" more or less makes up for it. |
| Skye Lemsky 2001-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a quite depressing poem, but meaningful as well. |
| Jetso 2000-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abusenot half bad, in fact very good. Don't normally review, but saw no one ever wrote anything... well... here I am writing a garbage review... anyway. Love thing imagery of the wind, the broken mirrors and dreams. the touch of 'old english' with the 'hath' is nice too. very very depressing, but that's the beauty of it, with the hint of hope at the end. very very good. More I read it... more I like.... that way with most things. |