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| Evil Child 2004-01-18 ch 1, | interesting ;p; *is officially too tired to comment but trying anyway;;* either you've gotten a lot better or randomly attempting to understand sonnets for the first quarter of school has randomly led me to realize how good poetry is ;p. - EC |
| Koujo 2004-01-18 ch 1, | Mizuko, I only saw one small problem with the poem. In line 7 the word leaf is spelled incorrectly. Other than that, it is perfect. Wonderful. I like the mood of this poem. ^_^ |
| cosmo-queen 2004-01-17 ch 1, | Good poem, based on a very original idea. The imagery in this poem is very nice. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |