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Reviews For: Flirting with Nature

Evil Child
2004-01-18
ch 1,
interesting ;p; *is officially too tired to comment but trying anyway;;* either you've gotten a lot better or randomly attempting to understand sonnets for the first quarter of school has randomly led me to realize how good poetry is ;p.
- EC
Koujo
2004-01-18
ch 1,
Mizuko, I only saw one small problem with the poem. In line 7 the word leaf is spelled incorrectly. Other than that, it is perfect. Wonderful. I like the mood of this poem. ^_^
cosmo-queen
2004-01-17
ch 1,
Good poem, based on a very original idea. The imagery in this poem is very nice. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
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