interesting ;p; *is officially too tired to comment but trying anyway;;* either you've gotten a lot better or randomly attempting to understand sonnets for the first quarter of school has randomly led me to realize how good poetry is ;p.
- EC

Mizuko, I only saw one small problem with the poem. In line 7 the word leaf is spelled incorrectly. Other than that, it is perfect. Wonderful. I like the mood of this poem. ^_^

Good poem, based on a very original idea. The imagery in this poem is very nice. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*