i am NEVER going swimming at night again. =S
really goods, ur going on my favs.

that was really good- i love the imagery- especially in the second and third stanzas... I really like this ^^;
- EC

oh... dark. I like it. It's very thought provoking. And you know me, I live for that. ^_^

Beautiful poem! Angst - yay for angst! Deep angst, too. :P I love deep, angsty (

A gentle splash combined with a smile
in LOVE with that line, good poem, flows nice