|Reviews for Fresh Game|
| Black Earrings 8/22/04 . chapter 1
That was so...forceful. I can't pick another word to describe it, except maybe "wow". That reminded me of my Bright Eyes boy. Yay for Infinate Smiles!
| Post Apocalyptic 7/28/04 . chapter 1
Simple but nice. Makes me thnk of the EvenESense song.
| Incrys 3/19/04 . chapter 1
I continually envy your abilty with rhyme and rhythm. I love the analogy you use here, too.
| Samekian 2/23/04 . chapter 1
Good, but I think the second last line should have been shorter. Name and game are too far away for the rhyme compared to say and decay. I liked the theme though, very good.
| Seeker of the Way 1/20/04 . chapter 1
This felt like two different poems meshed together. I was going to use that as a criticism, but them I remebered that Beck did a few lyrics like that.
Nice way to work off of the beats of a theme! You are really onto something!
| BecomingMyself 1/18/04 . chapter 1
Interesting to look at infatuation as only physical attraction and explicitly as a game!
| TumblingKitty 1/18/04 . chapter 1
Wow, interesting...nice metaphore _. Lookin' forward to reading some of your other stuff to figure out your style.