Hello-
Wow-
You really have a knack for creative haikus.

Whoa.

I like the phrases that you use here, though I might not really understand. Hmm. I'm not good at titles (I have two groups of haikus called "Haiku Collection" and "Haiku Collection 2" to give you an idea hehe) Err. you could just call it "Disasterous Love" or "Emotional War" or simply "Love" or "War" haha you don't wanna ask me for things like this...but I just take from the poem when I title my stuff-and simple titles are the easiest, I think.
Kiara
Thanks for reviewing my essay on gay marriage! I'm straight too, but that won't stop me from believing that all people, regardless of sexual orientation, should have rights. It's great that other people will stand up for beliefs too! yay!

That's really good!

I liked the second line

I don't think that's overdone. It's how you feel, and you can't deny how you feel.

this is pretty good i dont even know how to write a haiku poem so hats off to you umm as for a title sorry cant help you there i suck at stuff like that well good write and thanks for the review
BranyBear

I'm not a big fan of Haikus ..but I like this one..

Suggestion for title?
hmm, what about *Broken Romance*?
it is sad to love in such a mind-rending manner.

Ok, I have an idea for a title, (by the way... I liked it bunches! Lots of feeling! _) and I hope it doesn't sound dumb but... "War of Emotions"? Please don't think that sounds dumb! PLEASE! I like it and think it would suit this Haiku very well... PLEASE LIKE IT!

I really like this haiku! I was wondering if I could use it on my website. Please e-mail me at with a reply. Thanx.

Wow! I'm lovin' it, (I said it chia style n/m) You didn't put it under haikus so no wonder I didn't see it, I like it!

You don't suck at it...this one's pretty good, and strong...very powerful words.

Incredibly spoken
Pure of heart and very concise
this is awesome, truely

Oh, yeah...

It's a classic case of expressing so much in so little...

Good job...

Keep writing