This is very good, and only gets better. The woman of fiction most men wrote true is painfully accurate, and only serves to add more to this character. I love how he has remained nameless. It represents a quality of mystery to him, but at the same time, he could be any soldier. Good work,
Redsky

hey! this was really god honest! Keep it up girlie!i wanna see much more form u!~Britt

This is good. A very well done description of a scared young man forced into a war which he wants no part of. I think the only thing I can suggest is perhaps adding more description of what things he's seen. Men burned by mustard gas, coughing out their last for days at a time, men hit by machine gun fire. These weapons were not used in any war previous and I think it would be terrible to see a man torn open by hundreds of bullets at a time while hanging from barbed wire. Well, just a suggestion, but it would show the gritty, ugly, and senseless reality of war.
Good luck