I think this is really good, and don't hate me, please, but I'll say again, that maybe the chapters could be longer...don't hate me :hides under duvet:

I like this story. And don't hate me for saying this. But I think it would be a lot better if you made the chapters longer. If you need any help, e-mail me,

oh no...I feel so bad for Shuya. I can't believe James would do a thing like that. Please update really soon.

this is so sad. please write more really soon.

of corse i like it write more i love things that are disturbing yay

Shuya-kun ;-; KEEP GOING!