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uttanutta 2005-04-19 ch 1,	abusecool story i love it. it was nice of you to include your freinds hope you keep on writing good luck.
biminator 2004-09-16 ch 6,	abuseouch. that's gotta hoit. crunch. anyway, well-written. update soon.
Silverleaf-Rand 2004-08-04 ch 5,	abuseNice story, hope you put up an update soon!
biminator 2004-07-27 ch 5,	abuseooh. this was another great episode. i can't wait for the conclusion. update soon.
biminator 2004-07-27 ch 1,	abuseincredible pice of fiction. truly a pleasure to read. your Mek descriptions are great, and the space battles are well-planned. fabulous job. I look forward to reading the other chapters when I get the chance.
Emerald 2004-07-08 ch 5, anon.	abuseConcluded? No! That can't mean the story is gonna end already! This story is too good to end now! Oh well... it was good while it lasted.
Mbwun 2004-07-07 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, a believeable if somewhat unoriginal plot, good action, and some excellent touches of humor. Integrating your friends into the story was a nice touch, too. ~He Who Walks On All Fours
winged fury 2004-06-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat I dont I understand is when percepter exploded its mek's went to earth or around its orbit, so percepter was close bye to earth, and in the beginning the chancellor was saying the colonies renamed the moon so the colonies are close to earth, therefore when winger hailed percepter he said the were to get out of the system and thats made up of 9 planets(10 including the new one)how could that be? Anyway I loved the story you should have winger betray the other pilots and either go against both sides or go to the federation.
Winged Fury 2004-06-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseGreat story! I noticed you used some names from the oblivion chronicles.
Emerald8 2004-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseHiya Red.I need an account on this site so I'm not logged in. Woah! This story was completly awsome! It reminded me of Gundam, my favorite anime. It's similar but diffrent in a good way. Charectors are great, story is great, writing is great save for a few spelling misstakes (okay, alot. But I've gotten used to that in your stories) anyways, this was so long, it will take me awhile to read the others. I might even say this is even better than your Sonic stories in a way. But that doesn't mean you should stop making them. They were the first real fan fiction I ever read! (For a school report about our favorite book we read I made mine about Origins and chronicles. Yes, I'm that big a fan.) About getting rid of The Pretty Side of Pain. I never read it. But on FUS (fans united for SatAM) there is a link to a web site Called the pretty side of pain. I went on it, it's just a place with shrines (boring web pages) to charectors including Snively. Anyways, I might read one more today while I download a game later. (Neo sonic Godspeed from Manic Team software) so for now, bye!
Master Chief 2004-06-18 ch 4,	abuseVery good chapter here. I see everything pointing to an all out melee with Art vs. Star Force 1. And unless the Mek that Art has is stronger than all five of SF1, then I don't see how it could be a contest. And then there's General Zechs. Only an offhanded mention here, but he's named after arguably one of the biggest bad asses in Gundam lore and i pray that he's not wasted. I hope you don't make him a pushover. Can't wait till you update. M.C.
Master Chief 2004-06-18 ch 3,	abuseSorry I've been so long winded in getting to this. I'm really glad you switched to this format. It's a lot easier to enjoy for the lazy reader like myself. Now on to the review. I like the interaction between the pilots although I think Jay is a little too anti-social... but that's just a personal preference. The Mek pilots seem too disjointed, aside from Anthony and Allan. Again, that's how you want them to be, so I can't complain. I'm really looking forward to the prospect of this sixth Mek. There's all kinds of possibilities there. I wonder if it will be more powerful than the other Meks combined, in which case that will make for some insane battles. On to the next chapter. M.C.
Java-chan 2004-06-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseTalk about a small world... Jay's gushing over this cool mek fic he's been put in, and mentions some of the characters -- and talk about spittake on my part. "Ben HarWHAT? Harvestboy?! Like, the guy on teh Bible section? o_O;" Er, ficness. Good, just mught use a little spellcheck betaing. Nyo.
R'zor of the Wind 2004-06-06 ch 4, anon.	abusenot bad, that was realy good sounds like a japanese anime and I keep visualising the MEKs like the realy big robot in Dextor's Labrotory keep up the good work, I'd like to know what that 'useless' program does Reza Kaze R'zor of the Wind
pvc 2004-05-14 ch 1,	abuseNice. A good rousing sci-fi tale containing typically delightful elements such as: - A band of unlikely confederates thrown together by fate and bound together by a higher mission. - Twisted political intrigue driven by selfish ambitious pols whose schemes threaten to unleash a hideous war. - Plenty of technology, space flight and yes, GIANT ROBOTS (drool, drool.) The author uses the device of parallel story lines converging onto a climax to great effect, holding the reader's attention through what is, after all, a rather long chapter. Potential readers daunted by the length - courage! It's worth the effort. This reviewer must confess being ignorant of the conventions of Anime - being more a creature of 60s/70s SciFi, so he can't speak to how this story fits into that world. But this story stands on it's own very well. It would be nice if future chapters were shorter than this, but that's just a quibble.

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