I definitely like the first four lines, not so sure about the last five. But good anyway, je crois.

I like this poem, its really soft.
~Diane

Perfect perfect perfect perfect absolutely EXCELLENT! I'm fav authoring you!


It flows, good message, meters perfect. Very very nice. The only thing I don't understand is why you called it "Lost". I think it sounds wonderfully optimistic; like you've just gotten thru something tough. Oh well, it doesn't matter; its beautiful either way.