You really have a way of rhyming words- they never sound awkward! You know best how to describe things in just the right way- reading it, I felt girly and happy. *that is very embarassing to admit* Keep up the great poetry!
Lion Rose ^_^
Again, another fantastic piece! Ah, I'm a total sucker when it comes to romantic petry. Everything here seems so delicate and pretty. You're beloved is quite fortunate to have such a devoted admirer; I'm envious! :)