I like this I'm interested to hear more definitaly.
~Diane

Hmm ... it's a cool concept ... but it needs a little tweaking. A little more detail, a few more adverbs and adjectives and whatnot. At the beginning when you mention Dr. Burton, be sure to state then that Dr. Burton is a woman ... cuz I was thinking she was a guy until the end of the prologue. So yeah, just stuff like that ... good job though. ^^*