   poetic abortion 2005-03-20 . chapter 1Beautiful, beuaitful, beautiful.
!~* Noelle *~! |
 white-clouds 2004-11-01 . chapter 1Wonderful... |
 Children of the Root 2004-01-29 . chapter 1great peom! I love it. Mime, its truly wonderful. |
 teh tarik 2004-01-18 . chapter 1That was breathtakingly beautiful. I cannot find better words to describe it...the brilliance of it. Way to go ^_^ |
 Deadwind 2004-01-18 . chapter 1Awesome job on this! I like this! |
 Crow08 2004-01-18 . chapter 1A sweet escape. Great poem. |
 Jimmy Jazz 2004-01-18 . chapter 1I LOVE this! Seriously, this is amazing, fantastic! |
 Morncreek 2004-01-17 . chapter 1Estupendo! (Stupendous!) This is written wonderfully; very excellant choice of words. I can just see that sky... |
 simpleplan13 2004-01-17 . chapter 1 cool i like the format! |
 Keep it 100 2004-01-17 . chapter 1This really does show the ideal of flying away from inner turmoil. Very beautiful. |
 obsidian katana 2004-01-17 . chapter 1wonderful piece! well written, inspiring, insightful, and meaningful. i like this a lot. beautiful imagery as well, great job. keep writing! |
 Anjeni Windsinger 2004-01-16 . chapter 1Wow... this is brilliant. You chose your words well, it brings out so much in the poem. You know, this is the sort of poem that I can read over and over and never get tired of reading it. Awesome write, I love it. |
 godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-01-16 . chapter 1Last two lines made the poem. Awesome. Flight is so poetic, as a tragedy or fantasy...the elusive dream we've chased so long in vain...*sigh*
~lyv |
 noodletwin 2004-01-16 . chapter 1yay!! ^__^ its prettyfull. I likes it. |
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