wow, well written, the flow is grest, and its very pwoerful

I really liked this poem, because it completely express how you are feeling and i know others can relate. I do have one piece of constructive critism. You may consider altering the third line in the thrid stanza a little. I get the feeling it should be stronger, or paint more of a picture. May i suggest "Being torn apart" or "Beaten down, and betrayed by the rest of the world." Hope i helped. I enjoy your stuff so please keep writting!

Awesome poem! I love the rhyme and meter and it really speaks to me. Well done!