 glitterjewele 2004-07-31 . chapter 1aw, that's sweet. it has this great simplicity that's really truthful, and i love that in a poem. i especially like how you incorporated/personified the seasons, they really brought it to life. "loved by summer, kissed by fall/to love is to believe in all" was my favorite little couplet there ~ very nice. and the runner up was "secrets are the vicious seas/and rivals are the storm" ~ because you made such good use of it as a contrasting image, by the way you followed it up. so yes, overall, terribly cool poem, chica.
and since i'm here, thanks so much for the reviews on break *hug*. glad you think there should be a sequel, purely because . . . there is in fact going to be one (lol). there's a little sneak-peek summary at the end of the last chapter, if you're interested. ;)
again, very very good poem, i enjoyed it immensely. awesome work! ! :D |
 Vilverin 2004-01-17 . chapter 1Aww, this is such a good poem, I love it. I think it totally captures the meaning of Friendship. Great job, many people have tried and I've read their poems but this one touched me. Great Writing, I'm adding this to my favourites list.
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